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queen of spades by ~creepy-face:iconcreepy-face:

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Submitted: April 19, 2008
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Make: PENTAX Corporation
Model: PENTAX Optio E40
Shutter Speed: 1/30 second
F Number: F/2.8
Focal Length: 6 mm
ISO Speed: 400
Date Picture Taken: Apr 15, 2008, 3:04:55 PM

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some are queens of hearts
some are jokers
i think i must have messed up
'cause im a queen of spades
without you i live on dark games
and im using my spades to dig myself an early grave
i can't escape
still i hope it isn't too late
hope is all that keeps me here
but you know just like me
if we aint together i might aswell fall and die
'cause i can't see a me, if there isn't a you and i
all this time ive been so holow
feeling you burning deep inside of me
stoped me feeling so empty
ive never forsaken you
i can't hold on anymore
without you i will die for sure
i can't run anymore
i can't lie anymore
do you want this to?
have you thought it through?
wont you just let me be the queen of your heart
till death tear us apart
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~condork:iconcondork: Apr 19, 2008, 12:35:19 PM
Absoloutly fantastic
Really really did make me feel something

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I push my fingers into my eyes
Its the only way that slowly stops the ache
If the pain goes on
I'M NOT GOING TO MAKE IT
~creepy-face:iconcreepy-face: Apr 19, 2008, 12:39:41 PM
ah thanks! certanly got the emotion atm just hope i can get it into wat i do

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~condork:iconcondork: Apr 19, 2008, 12:48:30 PM
thats all what poetry is I think ^^

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I push my fingers into my eyes
Its the only way that slowly stops the ache
If the pain goes on
I'M NOT GOING TO MAKE IT
~creepy-face:iconcreepy-face: Apr 19, 2008, 1:58:34 PM
i aint any good at it though lol its just expressing myself

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today im dirty, tomorow i'm just dirt


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~condork:iconcondork: Apr 19, 2008, 2:11:03 PM
You fucking are! Its great!
And poetry is expressing yourself!

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I push my fingers into my eyes
Its the only way that slowly stops the ache
If the pain goes on
I'M NOT GOING TO MAKE IT
~creepy-face:iconcreepy-face: Apr 20, 2008, 3:54:22 AM
ok ok :)

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today im dirty, tomorow i'm just dirt


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~Zekhezar:iconZekhezar: Apr 30, 2008, 8:05:52 PM
i love that red nail polish :heart:
and the poem... striking!!

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~creepy-face:iconcreepy-face: May 1, 2008, 2:50:11 AM
thanks

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today im dirty, tomorow i'm just dirt


:iconOrangeClub: :iconGwennhadu: :iconfrancophones: :iconBeruriers-Noirs: :iconcelts: :iconYellowClub: :iconClub-Blue:
:iconexperienceORANGE: :iconPurpleClub: :iconallstars: :iconnight-shots:
~Absolute-Xero:iconAbsolute-Xero: Jan 27, 2009, 6:26:53 PM
I love this. i can relate to this feeling...

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The world has finally broken
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